JOEY ((VS)) Black death chronicles

~*~_______<<( #TBOH )>>________
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~*~.~~~*~ BRUTAL BATTLE ~*~~~
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~~~~~[[Joey Khatel]]~~~~~~~
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vs
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~~~~~~[[Black death chronicles]]~~~~~~~
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1 round
8bars min 12bars max
24 hour Tl.
House rules
No Vampires
No Houdinis
No Bitching
No Fuckery
No Spam
No Swaying.
First to check goes last


Joey Khatel

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Well.. He's gon' blab of how he beat me.. Bla
bla bla Smh..
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Its that time when I school.. This noob claimin'
FAKE ASS GANGSTAR.....!...Typin' bars?.. I'd
rather waste time POSTIN' A LETTER......!.... Kuz
mah flow gat "hot blades".. Than the GHOST OF
SPARTA.!!....
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aim to yo' chest.. Kuz I spot "low lite pulse"..
Lower than IRON MAN...!......so even wif yo'
vest on..you'll have to "steal/steel" to handle
mah CANON BARS.. .!!
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»Gos(god of war/
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When I spit.. Its MADE TO SEIZURE..!.... Since
I'm a priest......I PRAYED TO JESUS....!..... For
mah sin...I'm gon stab...like I PLAYED WITH
SCISSORS....
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Hold up?..
How you gon spit?.. When you deliver "dry
flows"..like the "story goes".. When I pull "ace
outa deck"'?... I'll be TOSSIN' ON TABLES....still
waste of bet.. Like... LOSSIN' ON STABLES..!!!
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Deck(cards) /ace..cards..
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I never FAVOURED GYM......
Ion need Muscle I pull the trigger
once..MULTIPLE HITS....... Reload the same
bullet that FELL OF HIM.. Blast his
UTRICLE,VERTICAL BLITZ.!!! ...
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.. And if you heard he's good?.. Gives head in a
one NIGHT STAND!!.. labelled grade " A toxic"
put in LIGHT CANNED...like em PSYCHIATRIC
WARD!!!...
Kux the way mah "flows be droppin"'.. It'll be
BREAKIN' CHORDS.!!
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Light container/room.. Lunatics rooms.. Toxic
stored in a white/light can.. ace toxic.. Gerrit.!!!!
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There's no way his punch is gon' hit me.. Like
I'm the STANDING REF....or his a BLIND
BOXER...darm fraudster ..buh I'll be Binding
theft.!!.. Kuz these spex barely 'feelin' you.. All
bet says I'm killing you.. By ZAPPIN' like
DRACULA .... Clear Stompin'.. Call that BASHIN'
ur MENDULA.!!
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#Joey..
#S_B





ÅÇé Töxìk Jåy-rydäh'süprèmé

~~~*~Black death chronicles~~~*~
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Grim reaper..pulls out scythe..opens book of
death ready to collect another soul...
JOEY YOU ARE NEXT!!!!
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Which sex position produces the ugliest
children?
answer: Ask joey's Mother
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In this battle joey is like an 'amatuer body-
builder' in practice..he'sTRAINING TA FLEX but
im accurate with my 'shots' when im SPRAYING
THE TECHS and when it comes to 'bars' im
'PAYING IN CHEQUES'..
but you? The only time you 'fucking hard' is
when ya 'PAYING FOR SEX'..when im AIMING
THE TECHS im'a leave blood on this thread..im
DISPLAYING A MESS now watch as i kill joey
without BREAKING A SWEAT!!!!
shots/techs(type of gun)
bars/cheques(payment over the counter)
:::::-DEATH MODE SWINGS SCYTHE-::::
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see my 'my raps like' a 'gaf knife' i severe
heads
with my words call that 'VERBAL DECAPITATION
so act right or get smacked right..this whack
dyke takes forever to drop a verse like
ETERNAL PROCRASTINATION..but i bring more
heat than a 'THERMAL regulATIONS')))))//
7th battle and i murked you '6' times that's a
HAT TRICK TWICE and in this battle i cut up your
HEART into a THICK SLICE...
you also got murked by 'pravin' once
again..HOW MANY 'Ls' are on your BATTLE
SHEET? tryna wage war with so MANY FAILS on
yoir BATTLE SHIPS)))//
joey has been claiming he's a priest lately..but
"lying" his dope.. how's that for a "FALSE
PRIEST"
and your "anus" getting jealous of your mouth
because of how much you "TALK SHIT" but i got
harder bars than an "erect COCK IS")))//
You had a tendacy of biting bars that shows
your BRAIN THINKS BACKWARDS'guess you are
living proof 'EVOLUTION can work in REVERSE/
this INSANE n SICK COWARD will be left in an
ILLUSION with a scythe IN-HIS-FACE
You picked the 'wrong card' joey and ended up
GETTING 'ACED'//
you did the same by making a callout to pravin
and ended up GETTING chASED


:::- BLACK DEATH CHRONICLES -:::
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BOOK OF DEATH CLOSED
I'M DONE BRUHV Olaleye Gift Emmanuel Joey
Khatel Sheree Rage Rae Samuel Wira Fenix
Keelan Arnold Mark Nantsupremacy Ryze
Supremacy Nicki Andro Supremacy Joshua
Akuhata-Brown Itz Tha Ju'dge Reign CayCray
Marvel





Sizwe Slim Zuma

UNBIASED VERDICT!!!
Opener=Ace
Closer=ace
Punches=tie
Metas=joey
Humor= ace
Personals=ace
Nameplays=tie
Puns=ace
Flow= Joey
Multies= tie
Creativity=joey
MVGT / ACE
Dope scripts fam...you both have really grown
keep it up!!!







Thabang Nicco Moatshe

No Biased Shit Both Of Em Like Brothers To Me
So....
:::Opener::Ace
Ace's Opener Was Personal And Humour In
There
Well Joey's Opener Was Really Good And
Personal But If We Both Look In Criterion
Method Numerically Ace Outclased Joey
:::Closer::Ace
#Ace's Closer 'NameTaged Pravin Which Was
Literally Personal To Joey
As For Joey Just A Filler
:::Flow::Ace
How Can Ace Take This?
Well He Got Innies And End Rhymes Well
Constructed
Either Joey, I'll Give This To Ace For His Innies
Impressive
::Wordplays::Joey
Just Here And There Nice Work Bro
::Metas::Joey
Hidden Asf Make It Sound Metaphorically Bro
Nice Touch
::Multies::Ace
No Debate For His Innies And Endings
::Humour::Ace
Obvious We All See That
::NameFlips/Tags:::Ace
::Personals::Ace
No Debate !!
::Diction::Tie
::Connectivity::Ace
Well Connectivity Goes With The Flow Folks So
Fuck Off Joey
::Punches::Joey Numerically He Outclassed Ace
So Fuck Off Ace
::Puns::Joey
Quiet Lot Of Them See That Lower Than Iron
Man Bluh Bluh
::Creativity:: None
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8/10 Rated Battle.
MFGVT:::ACE
Nice Work In There Folks
Well For Both Of You I've Speechless
No Comment I Felt Your Scripts No Hate No
Beef I Loved Them
#Respect





D Name'z Leocisco Joe Jr.
MHV

Opεnεr 1pt-Acε
Multiεs/Rhymεs 2pts-Acε
Mεtaphor 2pts-Joεy
Punchlinεs 3pts-Joεy
Flow 2pts-Joεy(Via Shortεr Vεrsε)
Pεrsonals 3pts-Acε
Wordplay/Namεplay 2pts-Joεy
Contεnt 1pt-Acε
Humour 1pt-Acε
Closεr 1pt-Tiε
Joεy 9:8 Acε
Mvqt-Joεy
Dopε Brawl I Must Say




Monster-Ny Sekgobela

#Opener------- ACE
#Closer--------- Tie
#Punchlines-- Joey
#Multies-------- ACE
#Metas---------- Joey
#Personals------ Ace
#WordPlay------- Joey
#NamePlay------ Joey
#Flow-------------- Joey
#RhymeScheme --- ACE
#Humour------------- Joey
#Aggression--------- ACe
#Connectivity------- Joey
#Diction--------------- Joey
#Delivery-------------- Ace
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OVERALL MVGT--------> Joey Khatel
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Joey Dope Verse but You gotta Strengthen Yo
Multies and Learn How To Personally Attack Yo
Opponent... I See Dope metas Right There With
Nice Wordplays... Punchlines Were All Set well
But just need To Work on em a little but
Otherwise dope Work G...
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Ace you A Beast Bro i Respect yo Opener And
yo Closer that was sick... but you forget to keep
the fire burning On some part of yo Verse....
this Is What stabbed you, try to Remain
Consistent Bar After bar... some of yo
Punchlines Weren't Connecting Perfectly.... Yo
Multies were Dope As Fuck... Work On Yo
Wordplays/nameflips And Stregthen Yo Metas
You'll Be Unstoppable....
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#DopeBrawl
#Respect



Luna C Quake

#OPENER... A.
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#FLOW.. J.
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#MULTIES.. TIE .
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#META. TIE..
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#PUNCHES. A.
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#CLOSER.. A ..
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#MVGT ACE ...
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It was tight as FUCK but Ace edged it... #SALUTE
I'm outty ...